Selasa, 02 Februari 2016
My hobby
My hobbies are laying computer, playing with my dog, watching television. It is fun if you could have a hobby it just doing at your free time. I like it because it's fun and you could do it. I like playing with my dogs. It's fun playing with your own pets. And I like to watch videos or television at weekend or playing computer games. It's very fun. You can have many hobbies or anything you like to do positive. It's fun if you have many hobbies. Or go walking in the morning or exercising it's good for your health. Its great to have fun hobbies. Hobbies are just thing that you like to do but it must be positive way.
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I think you used too many repetitions of words in your writing and you shouldn't do that. Grammar should also be improvised and the punctuations too. Give more reasons on why it is your hobby. Keep improvising xx. :)
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