Gift
One day live a family. The family was decorating the christmas tree. They are going to celebrate Christmas. Christmas were their favourite holiday season. The kids like to help their parents decorate the christmas tree its their favourite thing to do. After a long time decorating they all finished to decorate the entire house. When its Christmas they went gathered near the christmas tree and make wishes, sang a happy song, and had devotion together like the other family. The house was made relaxing with the fireplace and the socks that were hang there. their mom cooked many kinds of food. The kids favourite one is the desert that their mom made. Finally they all ate the food. They went to the christmas tree and opened out their presents. The children were so excited . They hurriedly opened out the presents. The two kids got a new toy car. They played that toy car and didn't want to stop they got two toy cars. Because they argued to exchanged each others toy car they broke the toy car. They all the kids argued all day long. Their mother promised if they be good kid she will give them a new one. They apologized each others and they became best friends. Their mom was so happy and bought them two toy car the same so they don't argued anymore. The know if they fight they will not get knew toy cars. They played the toy car all day long. But they play it very carefully and slowly. And after that they never argued anymore.
and again, it will be so much better to be typed or at least written in a neat handwriting. When your handwriting isn't that nice, your reader wouldn't be attracted to read. xx. :)
BalasHapusI think you should photo it clearer and please write it neatly otherwise the reader won't be interested on your composition -w-
BalasHapusJust like what michelle and joy said, you need to write it neat and tidy. It's not prohibited to take a picture of your story. but if you want to, you can type it. •
BalasHapusWell, I agree with your friends' comments. You must be more diligent to type it. I cannot read it, unclear.
BalasHapusPut more attempts next time.
'No pains, No gains' they say.
'No pain, No gain'
BalasHapus